Journey

(Final Revision)
Journey

And I was traveling along the road
As I was carrying a heavy load

My path, the road— the zigzag road was dark
And I could find no light, just void—no spark

The silence, deafened all, and senses fail
No sound, was found, not even whispers sail

Then from afar, a spark, then crimson light
But still, it’s void—just void—it’s none but blight

And I, my knees, then shivered—then fell
And all was there—was nothing—none but hell

(Draft)
Journey

I walked, along a road,
Burdened with heavy load

The sky was dark
No light, no spark

No sound
Was found

Then, crimson light
It’s none but blight

And on my knees I fell
I see nothing but hell

(1st Revision)
Journey

And I was traveling along the road
As I was carrying a heavy load

My path, the road— the zigzag road was dark
And I could find no light, and none—no spark

The silence, deafened all, and senses fail
No sound, was found, not even whispers sail

Then from afar, a spark, then crimson light
But still, it’s none—it’s none—it’s none but blight

And I, my knees, then shivered—then fell
And all was there—was nothing—none but hell

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~ by Specter on August 11, 2007.

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